edu-Gap-a-year

虽然有些人高中毕业后会直接进入大学，但也有一些人会选择先休学一年，去旅行或工作。

个人： Although someone can directly go into university, but someone choose get rest for year, to travel or work.

AI： Although some students prefer to go straight to university, others choose to take a gap year to travel or work.

范文： Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time.

在我看来，高中毕业后先暂时离开校园一段时间，其带来的好处远远大于这种做法可能产生的坏处。 个人： In my opinion, when you graduated from high school and leave it sometime, the advantage quiet more than the disadvantage. AI： In my opinion, the advantages of taking time away from school after graduating from high school far outweigh the possible disadvantages. 范文：
一方面，高中毕业后立刻接受高等教育确实存在一些弊端。 个人： On the one hand, there are some disadvantage after graduate from senior high school. AI： On the one hand, entering higher education immediately after high school does have some disadvantages. 范文：
首先，有些人非常清楚自己未来想从事什么职业，并且有很强的动力去完成实现梦想所需要的每一步。 个人： First, Some people quiet know in what he want to work in future, and They have strong motivation to finish them every step he dreamed. AI： First, some people are fully aware of the career they want to pursue in the future and are highly motivated to take every step necessary to achieve their goals. 范文：
对于这样的人来说，间隔年可能只是浪费时间和金钱，甚至还可能让一些年轻人逐渐偏离原本的人生目标。 个人： For such people, Gap year waste them time and money, even let some young people gradually deviate from the origin way. AI： For such individuals, taking a gap year may simply be a waste of time and money, and it may even cause some young people to gradually lose sight of their original goals in life. 范文：
其次，一些年轻人在工作期间赚到钱后，可能会觉得挣钱比回学校读书更有吸引力。 个人： Secondly, some young people think make money is more attractive than back to school, after they made money in work time. AI： Secondly, after earning money through work, some young people may find making money more appealing than returning to school. 范文：
这会削弱他们继续深造的意愿，而从长远来看，这可能带来相当严重的不利影响。 个人： In the long run, it weaken them willing, it can bring quiet significant bad effect. AI： This may weaken their willingness to pursue further education, and in the long run, it could have quite serious negative effects. 范文：
另一方面，暂停学习去旅行或工作，对年轻人来说也有数不清的好处。 个人： On the other hand, purposing studying to go travel or work, there are countless advantage for young people. AI： On the other hand, taking a break from studying to travel or work can also bring countless benefits to young people. 范文：
虽然有些高中毕业生已经非常明确自己未来想做什么，但我认为，大多数年轻人其实并没有真正想清楚人生方向。 个人： Although some graduate of high school know them what they want to do, I think, the majority of young people do not know them way actually. AI： Although some high school graduates already have a clear idea of what they want to do in the future, I believe that the majority of young people have not truly figured out their direction in life. 范文：
这主要是因为，如今很多孩子的成长环境受到较多保护，对“真实世界”究竟如何运转并不了解。 个人： This is mainly because, many children are protected in growing environment now, and they don’t know how ‘real world’ work. AI： This is mainly because many children today grow up in highly protected environments and do not fully understand how the real world works. 范文：
而通过间隔年，他们能够获得一些真实的社会经验，也能对未来可能从事的职业有更广阔的认识。 个人： And through gap year, they can get some society experience, get vast knowledge for work in the future. AI： Through a gap year, they can gain real-world experience and develop a broader understanding of the careers they may pursue in the future. 范文：
此外，如今的孩子往往经历了长达十二年的学校教育，这对很多人来说其实已经相当疲惫。 个人： In addition, that was exhaustion for children now, when they experience a education that lasted for as long as twenty years. AI： In addition, children today often go through twelve years of formal education, which can already be quite exhausting for many of them. 范文：
因此，暂时停下来去旅行或工作，能够帮助他们以更好的状态迎接之后的大学学习。 个人： Take a break for a trip or work, therefore, help they have a good status to prepare for university studies. AI： Therefore, taking a break to travel or work can help them return to university studies in a better mental state. 范文：
总而言之，我认为，在进入大学之前先花一段时间去旅行或工作，对当今大多数年轻人来说都会非常有益。 个人： In conclusion, I think to take a break for a trip or work before entering university, this is advantage thing for majority of young people. AI： In conclusion, I believe that taking time to travel or work before entering university can be highly beneficial for the majority of young people today. 范文：

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# chunks---------------------------------:
choose to do 
prefer to do
go straight to university
take a gap year
	不要忘记冠词
	a university degree
	a good opportunity
	a serious problem
travel or work
	take time to travel or work
take a break
	take a break to travel or work
senior high school -> high school
enter higher education
immediately
have some disadvantages
after high school  高中毕业后
fully aware of/have a clear idea of  非常清楚
	She is fully aware of the risks.
	Many students are fully aware of their goals.
pursue a career  想从事/追求的事业
	the career they want to pursue
pursue a career
pursue a goal
pursue success
in the future
take steps  采取步骤
	take steps to improve
	take every step necessary
	take action
achieve goals  实现目标
achieve their dreams
be highly motivated  有动力
waste their time and money
may be a waste of time and money
	名词化表达 waste
cause sb to do sth  导致/让某人去做某事
	cause students to lose motivation
	cause people to change their plans
lose sight of  渐渐忘记/偏离
	lose sight of their goals
	lose sight of what matters
drift away from  慢慢从...偏离
through work  地道的表达：通过工作这件事/工作期间
	while working
	during their time at work
return to school
	back to school  这个偏口语，不适合在写作中使用
	return to education
	return to their studies
attractive -> appealing  使用appealing表达吸引更加书面抽象
	appealing to sb  对某人有吸引力
		financially appealing
		more appealing than...
willingness (n.)
	willingness to do sth
	willingness to learn
	willingness to study
	willingness to continue
pursue further education  超高频，继续接受更高教育/深造
negative effects/harmful effects  负面/有害影响
	serious negative effects
severe negative consequences
have negative effects  带来负面影响
take a break from  暂停...
	take a break from studying
	take a break from work
	take a break from school  暂时离开学校
	pause their studies  
❌go travel  不能两个动词原形连接
	travel
countless advantages  数不清的优势
countless benefits  更高级
	因为benefit比advantage更抽象、更高级
	economic benefits
	social benefits
	long-term benefits
bring advantages  带来优势（更加高级）
bring advantages  带来优势
high school graduates  英语更喜欢名词前置修饰
	university students
	government policy
	school education
have a clear idea of  清楚知道...
	have a clear idea of what they want to do  表示他们清楚的知道想做什么
direction in life  人生方向
	future path
figure out
	figure out their future
	figure out what they want in life
upbringing  养育
environment they grow up in
protected environments
	grow up in protected environments  在被保护的环境中成长
	grow up in highly protected environments  相比very正式英语更加喜欢highly + 形容词
		highly competitive
		highly developed
understand how society works
understand how the real world works
don't know -> do not fully understand  （understand比know更加正式抽象）
fully understand
	fully understand the issue
	fully understand society
社会经验 不能说 society experience （没有这个表达
	real-world experience  超级高频表达
	practical experience
	life experience
获取经验  用gain不用get（正式英语很少用get） 且experience通常不可数
gain real-world experience
acquire knowledge  获取知识
develop a broader understanding of...  更全面的了解...
	develop a broader understanding of future careers
	broader understanding  更广阔的认知
	broaden horizons  开拓眼界
work  工作
job  一份工作
career  长期职业发展
understanding of  对...的理解/认知
go through  经历
	go through formal education  经历教育
	go through years of training
	go through difficulties
mental state  精神状态
	in a better mental state
	feeling more refreshed
	with a better mindset
status  地位/身份
state  状态
condition  身体/环境状况
help sb do sth
advantageous  
beneficial  adj.有益的（超级高频词）
	beneficial for students
	highly beneficial  非常有益的
	financially beneficial  财务上有益的
the majority of  大多数（超级高频表达）
	the majority of students
	the majority of people

# 其他---------------------------------:
# 先搭固件，再填内容
	Some people are fully aware of X and are highly motivated to do Y.
# 动词名词化（缺乏）
# 不要直接就是动词作主语，要么就动名词做主语
	Taking a break
	Working abroad
	Learning English

# 当需要表达 当人们...的时候 ，英文常常使用动名词压缩表达：after doing sth
# 介词（after/before/by/without）后面通常接 1.名词 2.动名词
after graduating from high school
after leaving school
before entering college

# 注意it的指代使用
# 注意其他代词的指代使用 以及 单复数/三单问题

# sometime的使用
sometime = 某个时候
sometimes = 有时候
some time = 一段时间

# 新词 outweight A 大于 B A 超过 B
far outweigh
The benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

# some 后面必须得接复数
some problems
some benefits
some drawbacks

# 句子主体不完整，对于SVO接口，必须要明确说清楚S到底是什么

# than后面必须要结构对齐
making money more appealing than returning to school
❌ She likes swimming more than to run.
✅ She likes swimming more than running.
	than结构需不需要be动词分以下情况
		当比较的对象是“动作/动名词短语”时，通常不需要“be动词”
		当比较的是“身份/状态”且主句有be动词时，than后面经常需要be动词
		当than引导的是一个完整的从句，且从句缺了be动词意思就不清时，要保留

# 以后看到第三人称，要记得判断动词是否需要+s！！！

# 注意区分 词性，写的时候要知道单词的词性才能不出语法错误
# 逗号拼接错误
	两个完整的句子，不能只使用逗号连接，可以使用and、which、semicolon(;)

# 英语喜欢弱化主观
	不要总：
	❌ I think
	可以开始升级：
	✅ I believe that  
	✅ I would argue that  
	✅ It seems that

# because后面不要加逗号，要直接接句子
	正确：
	✅ This is mainly because many children...
	不是：
	❌ because, many children...

# 在一个名词或者名词短语是特指时，记得加the
	the real world

# 突出成长环境，英语更加喜欢 grow up in  在...中长大

# how从句是高频的，是高级表达的重要组成部分

# 不定式表目的
	go abroad to study
	work hard to succeed
	take a break to relax

# 在正式英语中，highly比very更常用


# 句型---------------------------------:
对比句型：Although A, B    注：没有but，那是中文思维
than句型的注意点
Some people prefer to...
This is mainly because...
One possible reason is that...
On the one hand, ...
On the other hand, ...
I am willing to help
模糊化表达：
	may lead to
	could result in
	might cause
have not truly figured out...  
do not really understand...
I believe that...  （更正式推荐使用）
I would argue that...
In my opinion,...
Therefore...
..., and therefore...
I think that...  （不能在think 后面直接接不定式，因为think后面是一个观点，不能被一个不定式定义，且 believe that 比 think that更加正式）
In conclusion,...
Overall, it seem that...
To conclude,... can be beneficial for...